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Gumceline Fan Fic. Chapter One

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"Hey Finn, I have to cancel today's plans. I'm going to be visiting my dad." I lied into the phone. "Oh, okay Marcy. Maybe tomorrow." He replied. I could hear the disappointment in his voice and couldn't help feeling a little bad. I just had to get a break from him and Jake. I mean, we slayed some monsters together, which was fun, but he wanted to hang out after that and he just gave me a headache. Well, now that I had my day off, I just wanted to relax. I floated into my room and hovered over my bed. It was so comfy. I closed my eyes and just when I was about to drift into a peaceful sleep, I heard talking. Like it was right inside my cave. Who the heck would be stupid enough to be near my house right now? I rubbed my eyes and floated through my doorway sleepily. When I reached my front door I looked through the year. There was a man, well, he rather looked like a gentleman. He was all pink and shiny, and was wearing a pink suit of some sort along with a shiny crown on his head. I was very confused and I just decided to try and understand what he was saying. "The portal worked! I'm a genius! But wait..I never worked on another portal to get back to Aaa. Oh shoot! What do I do now!" I heard him say in a petite, small voice. I rubbed my eyes again and opened my door loudly. "Hey punk! What are you doing on my property!" I shouted. My voice echoed through the cave and he looked at me, obviously alarmed. A small noise, a squeak, escaped from him and he fainted, right on the spot. I shook my head and put my hand to my forehead, massing my temple a bit before floating out to inspect the man. I stopped hovering over his limp body and got on my knees. I poked his face, which felt very squishy. I felt his hair, which felt smooth and I tore off a bit, putting it in my mouth and chewing. Hmm....Bubblegum. He is just like that princess Bonnibel, er, Bubblebel, or whatever the name is, only a boy.
Well there you have it, the first chapter of my MarBall Fan Fiction. I actually made this Chapter like, four and a half pages long, so I have to cut it up :P So am I off to a good start or not?

NOTE: I did not draw or in any way make the thumbnail picture thing, this awesome Deviant did: :iconjackie-lyn:

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Liah2001's avatar
estoy estudiando ingles asi que esto me servira de puebra,deseenma suerte plz (por cierto te quedo bien )