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You were my everything, Simon.
My guardian,
My protector,
You were my like a father, Simon.

I trusted you.
Looked up to you,
Relied on you,
I loved you, Simon.

You'll never know how much I loved you.
Never know how much I cared,
Never know how much I adored you,
You'll never know how much I yearned to have you back, Simon.

Oh, my dearest Simon,
Why did you love that damned crown so much?
The icy madness had consumed you before I could save you…
I could have saved you...

I need you Simon!
How could you not see that,
When everything was so clear?
You blinded fool…my darling Simon…

You became consumed with insanity, Simon.
An insanity that is too much for your brain.
You can't help anything now.
You don't remember anything, do you, Simon?

Why did you do this?
Why did you have to wear the crown,
The very crown which you warned me about?
Why, oh why, my dearest Simon?

I was but a little girl!
A little girl lost in the wreckage of the world,
But you found me...
And you gave me hope, Simon.

You were there to be my father,
When my real one rejected me.
You protected me,
And I tried to do the same.

You were there to scare away the monsters hiding in my closet,
There to help me reach things too high.
You were there to read me my favorite stories,
There to help me learn new things...

And I was there to be your daughter, Simon.
I tried to make colorful drawings for you,
Tried to give you pretty rocks I had found.
I tried to cheer you up when you were sad.

Silly little child behavior, I suppose.
Thinking worthless drawings and rocks would help.
But I wanted so badly to help you,
I just didn't know what else to do!


But now you are this crazed idiot,
Always trying to get wives that want nothing to do with you.
You just regard me as nothing!
Oh, what has happened to you, Simon?!

Now I sit alone,
In my empty house just waiting,
Waiting for you to remember,
Remember everything…my sweetest Simon…

You were my everything.
I loved you.
And I could have saved you…
You don't remember anything, do you?
You gave me hope!
You tried to be a father to me,
I tried to be a daughter to you.
Oh, SImon, what has happened to you?!
Just please…please…remember…my dearest Simon….
Oh my lord this is bad ;_; I'm so sorry guys~ BUT I had to write something on the newest episode, "I Remember You." So I thought, "Why not a little poem from Marceline's point of view?" and then people were like, "NO IT'LL SUCK DON'T DO IT!!!" But I didn't listen, and now you guys are stuck with this >:3 And, I might actually write a short story, maybe two or three chapters, of Marceline and Ice King. It all depends :iconidklolplz: AND no romance intended 0_0 I tried to make it like a father daughter kind of thing but....

EDIT: Oh my goodness I added so many verses trying to make it seem more daughter-father like 0_0 I posted it maybe an hour ago (timing may be off x3) and I've already added so much stuff
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Lynnei-K Featured By Owner Oct 20, 2012
nice lyrics (i tryed to think that marceline is singing this)
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CannibaLoohoo Featured By Owner Oct 21, 2012
X3 thank you~
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OneAceNADozenHearts Featured By Owner Oct 18, 2012  Student Photographer
That moment when you try to turn it into a song in marcilens voice. .o.
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CannibaLoohoo Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2012
Lol, I do that all the time 0_0
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OneAceNADozenHearts Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2012  Student Photographer
Im not the only one! :D
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CannibaLoohoo Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2012
:D
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Stacey104201 Featured By Owner Oct 18, 2012  Student Writer
OH MY GLOB. You're a great poet!!
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CannibaLoohoo Featured By Owner Oct 18, 2012
Thank you darling :D
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sokkas-boomerang Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
[link] Marshall Lee and Ice Queen version!

Dude...it's sick what you did in that fanfic...it was totally hilarious though! And creepy...
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CannibaLoohoo Featured By Owner Oct 18, 2012
Wut fan fic lol. Fiolee....?
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sokkas-boomerang Featured By Owner Oct 20, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
Yes! The one with ice queen!
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:iconcannibaloohoo:
CannibaLoohoo Featured By Owner Oct 20, 2012
Ah yes...but again, Ice Queen doesn't remember anything.
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sokkas-boomerang Featured By Owner Oct 21, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
Hmm...true. But it would be awkward for poor Marshall!
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CannibaLoohoo Featured By Owner Oct 21, 2012
Yeah...
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sokkas-boomerang Featured By Owner Oct 21, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
:)
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sokkas-boomerang Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
:iconsniffleplz: WHY WHY MY DEAREST SIMON!!!:iconwhywhyplz: then ice king would be punched in the face so much...
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CannibaLoohoo Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2012
Yeah...
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sokkas-boomerang Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
*sigh..*
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CannibaLoohoo Featured By Owner Oct 18, 2012
Nerpaderpa
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sokkas-boomerang Featured By Owner Oct 20, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
XD What?
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CannibaLoohoo Featured By Owner Oct 20, 2012
Derpanerpa
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sokkas-boomerang Featured By Owner Oct 21, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
XD Yerpaderpa!
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anj100 Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2012
Great,
though it kinda seems like she is in love with him when you read this, she loves him like a father. i just think that if you made it more clear that it wasn't a romantic kind of love it would have been better.
but that's just my opinion, this is an amazing piece of work :)
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CannibaLoohoo Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2012
I tried to make it seem more like Marceline was more...like more 'woman' than rocker teen, you know? Like her emotions are so strong she talks formally. Lol, I'll try to work on that x3
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anj100 Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2012
ahhhh i see what you were going for now :)
you really are a gifted writer, keep the good work :)
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CannibaLoohoo Featured By Owner Oct 18, 2012
Glad I fixed it x3 I will never support Ice KingxMarceline :iconscarredforlifeplz:
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anj100 Featured By Owner Oct 18, 2012
its wonderful :D
thanks for listening to my comment :)
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CannibaLoohoo Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2012
You helped a lot x3 Iceline is disgusting :icongrossplz:
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anj100 Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2012
yes it is :nod:
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TravisRaccoonus Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
what are you talking about this is beautiful
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CannibaLoohoo Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2012
:'D Thank you~ I just have never really done something like this before and was nervous about what you guys would think
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TravisRaccoonus Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
well i think its very sweet

btw happy early birthday :party:
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CannibaLoohoo Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2012
Thank you :)
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TravisRaccoonus Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
np ^^
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fightking Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
oh god.
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CannibaLoohoo Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2012
Is it...the feels?
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fightking Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Just that they were more like father daughter, this is more of a "Make love to me" kinda thing.
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CannibaLoohoo Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2012
:icongrossplz:
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fightking Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
weird.
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